Hello again from the Philippines! Thanks for checking in!
Hope you are having a fantastic day as you come across my blog. Here, I’ve come up with a simple poem depicting my scribbled thoughts and displeasures from a not so good experience in the past. Since many of you have already experienced to love, be loved, and get hurt, you can surely relate.
To the Man I Loved Before
Your love was imminent
When our eyes first met
Turning my troubles into ecstasies
Crumbling hopes into fantasies
Your love was certain
When you held me in your arms
After kissing me tenderly
Under the glittering stars
Your love was secured
When you thought of no one but me
We built our dreams together
Sharing laughters and tears
Your love was unsure
When you began to grow cold
You suddenly changed your heart
Tell me, what went wrong?
Your love was a joke
When you left me without a word
Sitting by the window, I pondered
Maybe, his love was not true
But now, I thank you for everything
Thank you for the bliss of parting
When you left, I restored myself
I also found the love that I deserve!
Hey! Please feel free to comment so I may know your thoughts and reactions about this poem. I’d love to hear from you.
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© Lebana’s Journal 2020
Anabel G. Raymundo
By uniting your mixed feelings, that is, happy and painful, you are taking your verses to the mystery of making poetry. And if you make one feel it as you have, then it is a good poem.
Greetings for your dear Felipinas
Manuel (Chile-South America)
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Thank you. I must admit that I’m not that good in making poems.Just want to convey my feelings and release negativities through writing. Have a great day/night from where I live.
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You live on the other side of the world. Here it is 6:30 am
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Exactly,Sir..Thanks for stopping by.
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You are welcome
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I so loved and connected to it!
Nice!
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Thank you for the usual support. Have a great day and please stay safe.
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Hello from Malaysia, neighbour! I enjoyed this piece. Thanks for sharing!
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So glad to meet a new friend from a nearby country.Let’s support each other here.
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This is so beautiful and touching…💕
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Thank you.I just missed your uplifting words😀Have a great day ahead.
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My pleasure…
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sino? sabihin mo lang ano gusto mo gawin sa kanya! gusto mo ipakulam natin sya? galit ako!!!
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😜😜😜
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