Hello lovelies!
I hope you are all in a good shape, sound mind and spirit amidst the threats posed by COVID-19. Well, just a few days ago, my nephew, who just graduated from senior high school, asked me to pen a poem for his ultimate love named Ana. A high school love!Haha!
I hope that this poem reaches her attention and may she take this positively for all he wanted is tell her how much he loves and adores her. Indeed, love does find a way. Hope you appreciate this simple gesture of love.
Dear Ana
I was a lonely soul before you came.
Waiting for someone to be in sight.
Then, I learned your lovely name.
Suddenly, everything felt so right!
It started with a plain conversation.
Knowing each other is our main goal.
As days passed, it led to infatuation.
Mending my broken heart and soul!
Nights became days when we talked.
As if the world turned motionless,
Bound in a place I’ve never walked,
Stunned by the beauty you possess!
But, like some stories I hated to hear.
I didn’t expect that you would grow coldly.
The least you wanted was me to be near.
And all I remembered was your sorry.
Ana, even if you push me away,
As you tell me to forget you,
My love will be here to stay,
And it always remains true!
© All Rights Reserved
Anabel G. Raymundo
Lebana’s Journal 2020
Photo by: Ana Crisel Aniel
Tag. Chrisford Geneta
How smooth is that!
Look at the rhyme scheme.
I am sure to learn from you.
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Let us learn from each other,dear.Have a blessed day ahead.
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Very well written and a beautiful tribute and guidence
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Well appreciated it.Have a great day ahead!
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You too have a great day
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Very well said 👍👏 Ako din gawan mo tita 😂
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Soon,Michael😀
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Okay Lebana ! 😂 I’m willing to wait till tomorrow just kidding. Hope you make it as soon as possible to my beloved Girlfriend (Sherenol Nable) 😘😍
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I’ll try my best to write a poem for your dear girlfriend..Just give me enough time to craft..Okei!😀😜
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romantic. Ana definitely needs to read this . The heart speaks beautifully.
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Thank you for the kind words.This surely made my morning.😀😀
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A poem on demand. The menu, very simple: Declaration of love. And an aunt who consents. A great luck to your nephew because he has a poet who knows how to reach the hearts of others.
Good Sunday and you’re right. You have to take good care of yourself.
Manuel
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Thank you.You know when a high schooler falls in love,he thinks that he already finds his true love and destiny.Then after a week, he totally forgets everything.Haha!Have a great day and more power to your blog!
Wishes,
Lebana
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I love the poem, hope Ana too.. ❤️
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Thank you.That’s also my prayer.Hope she appreciate this simple gesture of him.BTW.Thanks for stopping by. Have a good day/night.
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You give off one serious romantic communicative mood. I love this.Fine job. You got me. gray
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Thank you for your kind feedback that warms my heart. Keep safe and more power to your blog!
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Well Ana it had to! 😅😅😅
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Thank you😀
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Ms Cyrano. I love it.
Terry
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😀😀😀
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Such a lovely tribute!
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