Suppressed from the depths,
Afar from the blazing fire,
Shackles are now wrecked,
Ready to intrude anytime.
As the lights efface briskly,
Frigid air emanates slowly,
Flamboyant shrieks drip,
Kissing the earth’s shield.
Heft of clouds dissolve,
As it pours from the sky,
Unhurriedly but surely,
Filling the world’s desire.
It softens the silhouettes–
Of flowers and leaves,
Mountains and trees,
Lying in its territory.
Fresh beginnings arise,
As various seeds sprout,
on its productive land–
Untainted and hallowed.
You are loved, dear rain,
I love how you wash away–
my fears and uncertainties,
yearnings and hollowness.
I simply love how you mollify–
my crumbling mind and physique.
Let me succumb in your loving arms!
Before I hungrily bathe in your gift!
© Copyright Lebana’s Journal
Anabel G. Raymundo
🔥🔥
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Thanks.
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On fire girly! I liked it.
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Glad you liked it.Wishes!
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🙂 Absolutely beautiful, Lebana!
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Thank you so much,Renard.Blessings!
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Ode to rain in Da Lat Vietnam:
Here in Vietnam its been raining night and day
I woke up this morning and wondered if it would stay
I gazed out the hotel window and what had begun
A morning with just a little hint of some sun
So I gathered my backpack and camera and was ready again
But by the time I got outside the sun had turned to rain
Now everyone here just uses a rain coat and goes on out
So I do the same and headed from within to without
But as soon as I got all decked out for the rain and gave the hotel my key
I looked out the front door and what did I see
It had stopped raining and there was that sliver of blue sky and sun
And it stayed that way all day what had just ended would soon come again
So what’s my decision in all these changes you make ask while in a coffee shop I sit
Well I think everyone talks about the weather but no one can do anything about it
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This is great,Sir Michael.It has been raining in my country for two days now as well.Keep safe!
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Simply Beautiful.
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Thank you,dear.
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Really beautiful🖤🖤
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Thanks,Harshita.God bless you!
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Rain cleanses and nourishes. Beautifully written!
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Thank you so much.😃😃
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You are welcome 😊
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Really liked it Lebana.
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Thank you so much!
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Just beautiful! It’s been raining off and on here in Charleston for a week. Good for the flowers!
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We have been experiencing the same weather here.I wish you well,dear.
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I heard. I called Mom yesterday and she told me so. Luckily there is no typhoon in Batangas.
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The weather is getting better today.Thanks God.
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So elegant and beautiful!💖 😊
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Thank you so much.😃😃
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Very pretty 🙂
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Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you,dear.
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It is for sure a perfect ode to rain. Loved reading it.
I wonder sometimes , why rain overwhelm us so much. Every time when it rains , I sort of unwind, break my shackles and set my soul free. Rain for sure has that effect on me..
Thanks for sharing such a lovely poem.
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The rain has the same effect on me. I love when it pours,it somehow mollifies my dreary soul and mind. Thank you for reading my posts.God bless.
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Very nice that 👍
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Thank you.
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😊
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Good one! Well written.
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Thank you so much.
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Lovely poem and I thank you for following one of my blogs.
The rain has messages for all of us… https://poetryphotosandmusingsohmy.wordpress.com/2012/05/26/and-the-rain-fell/
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The pleasure is mine.God bless you.
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Oh, so very gentle . . .
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Thank you.😃
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Very beautifully written!
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Thank you so much😀
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Most welcome!
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